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I feel like it may have had potential for something. Maybe meeting a buddy, entering macdonals and making a mess while working, pissing people off or just get hit by a car.

Still, it got a chuckle out of me.

Keep it up =)

toxicbomb responds:

Good ideas and I'm glad you got a chuckle too :B

Just a looped gif with a song on the background.
How did this got to be in the best of all time list?
Try harder next time...

Bolo responds:

Hard work, dedication to my craft, years of experience, and intellectual journies

A preloader would have been nice.
The animation was pretty smooth. And the sound really clear.

dinorobo responds:

I don't know how to make a preloader. I could have looked it up, but I figured I'd do that for newer animations only. Also thanks for your comments on the animation and sound.

Its a test alright.
I just noticed that the sound overlaps at some point. Dont know if you intended it.

D3lton responds:

Somethig is wrong with my flash, the audio carries on past it's key frames and it won't stop when I tell it to. If you could please help me it would be much appreciated. d3cartoons

There can be a lot more added to it. If it wasnt by the song, I wouldnt consider this to be an animation at all... just a camel with a background changing colors...
Try harder next time, please.

Josecamello responds:

This my first attempt at a flash animation. I am still learning the fundamentals of flash. I use my own original music. I feel thats plenty of effort to start off with. I really dont feel like its a complete peice of crap, but thanks for the critique.

Not bad, not bad at all.
The audio was clear.
The animation was alright (but nothing worth nothing)
The art was pretty good. Really realistic, I guess you put all your effort on it.

Just some constructive criticism:
- You could have added a play button so it wouldnt loop forever. I never heard the song, and Im already hating it as I write this...
- Change the title... why is there a .jpg thing there? It makes it sound as if it had poor quality
- You could have extended the ending a little bit.

Anyway, keep it up. If you keep drawing like this and improve you animation skills I wouldnt be surprised to find one day your animations in the front page =)

GamesR4FITE responds:

Um, nope.jpg is a pretty well known meme meaning "not gonna happen"...
But thanks for the rest. When I can learn how to do that stuff, I'll input it. :)

Really fluid and interesting, I really liked it... well, that was until it said 'Im Done'...
Had it been 30 sec longer (I know, I know... its such a pain to animate stuff) it would have been great.

Anyway, extra points for making something about kirby! =D
I hope to see something full length by you (and kirby) someday.

Geeksly responds:

Huzzah!

Could have been better =P

The voice acting was nice, I liked it.
The topic was alright.

But it could have been better... I mean, a little more movement. I was expecting the big dude to move and get angry at the end, but all I saw was a boring close-up (No offense).

Overall, it was an animation worth watching. Keep up the good work, next time add a little bit more movement and u will be on your way to make good stuff =)

TheYnnub responds:

Wow, I never expected anyone to compliment my voice acting. Thanks, man! xD
Yeah, I had originally intended to add another segment to the end, but I was on a deadline and cut it short. In the future I'll try to... spice things up a bit. :)

Keep it up

Nice work for only 36 hours. I liked it.

Justa couple suggestions ^_^
-Try to keep the action on one screen, too much fumbling around from one side to another kinda makes it annoying.
-Most of it was well timed, but maybe once or twice I felt that there was no action for no apparent reason. (the song thing was funny, but u could have inserted it near the end)
-Try to vary the sound effects
-And most importatly... the next battle should include kirby XD

Nice job dude, keep it up =P

GuitarKirby responds:

Ha, excellent, you actually read what I wrote. 36 hours was shooting quite high too, I didn't even really start animating until I had less than 12 hours, but I included all the parts of working. Oh, and you can expect Kirby in my next video. I figured he needed more screen time.

Meh...

Freeze was my favorite, the other stuff.... not so much, they lacked some humor or art or both...

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