cavpollo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gleaming Hard]

Just a looped gif with a song on the background.
How did this got to be in the best of all time list?
Try harder next time...

Bolo responds:

Hard work, dedication to my craft, years of experience, and intellectual journies

[Game Grumps - Hello Banjo]

A preloader would have been nice.
The animation was pretty smooth. And the sound really clear.

dinorobo responds:

I don't know how to make a preloader. I could have looked it up, but I figured I'd do that for newer animations only. Also thanks for your comments on the animation and sound.

[The angry camel dance]

There can be a lot more added to it. If it wasnt by the song, I wouldnt consider this to be an animation at all... just a camel with a background changing colors...
Try harder next time, please.

Josecamello responds:

This my first attempt at a flash animation. I am still learning the fundamentals of flash. I use my own original music. I feel thats plenty of effort to start off with. I really dont feel like its a complete peice of crap, but thanks for the critique.

[Call Me Maybe--nope.jpg]

Not bad, not bad at all.
The audio was clear.
The animation was alright (but nothing worth nothing)
The art was pretty good. Really realistic, I guess you put all your effort on it.

Just some constructive criticism:
- You could have added a play button so it wouldnt loop forever. I never heard the song, and Im already hating it as I write this...
- Change the title... why is there a .jpg thing there? It makes it sound as if it had poor quality
- You could have extended the ending a little bit.

Anyway, keep it up. If you keep drawing like this and improve you animation skills I wouldnt be surprised to find one day your animations in the front page =)

GamesR4FITE responds:

Um, nope.jpg is a pretty well known meme meaning "not gonna happen"...
But thanks for the rest. When I can learn how to do that stuff, I'll input it. :)

[Kirby's Sky Tussle]

Really fluid and interesting, I really liked it... well, that was until it said 'Im Done'...
Had it been 30 sec longer (I know, I know... its such a pain to animate stuff) it would have been great.

Anyway, extra points for making something about kirby! =D
I hope to see something full length by you (and kirby) someday.

Geeksly responds:

Huzzah!

[Gun Nuts: The Elevator]

Could have been better =P

The voice acting was nice, I liked it.
The topic was alright.

But it could have been better... I mean, a little more movement. I was expecting the big dude to move and get angry at the end, but all I saw was a boring close-up (No offense).

Overall, it was an animation worth watching. Keep up the good work, next time add a little bit more movement and u will be on your way to make good stuff =)

TheYnnub responds:

Wow, I never expected anyone to compliment my voice acting. Thanks, man! xD
Yeah, I had originally intended to add another segment to the end, but I was on a deadline and cut it short. In the future I'll try to... spice things up a bit. :)

[Link VS Pikachu]

Keep it up

Nice work for only 36 hours. I liked it.

Justa couple suggestions ^_^
-Try to keep the action on one screen, too much fumbling around from one side to another kinda makes it annoying.
-Most of it was well timed, but maybe once or twice I felt that there was no action for no apparent reason. (the song thing was funny, but u could have inserted it near the end)
-Try to vary the sound effects
-And most importatly... the next battle should include kirby XD

Nice job dude, keep it up =P

GuitarKirby responds:

Ha, excellent, you actually read what I wrote. 36 hours was shooting quite high too, I didn't even really start animating until I had less than 12 hours, but I included all the parts of working. Oh, and you can expect Kirby in my next video. I figured he needed more screen time.

[The Many Kirbys Collab]

Meh...

Freeze was my favorite, the other stuff.... not so much, they lacked some humor or art or both...

FlashfireEX responds:

Okay.