cavpollo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The angry camel dance]

There can be a lot more added to it. If it wasnt by the song, I wouldnt consider this to be an animation at all... just a camel with a background changing colors...
Try harder next time, please.

Josecamello responds:

This my first attempt at a flash animation. I am still learning the fundamentals of flash. I use my own original music. I feel thats plenty of effort to start off with. I really dont feel like its a complete peice of crap, but thanks for the critique.

[BeyBlade Was F'n Dumb]

Thanks for the effort and insomnia. It turned out pretty good.
I always thought there was something wrong with throwing some spinning thingies on a huge arena with obstacles and stuff.

[koopas]

Make the intro shorter and add some more story to it.
The drawing are nice though.

[Call Me Maybe--nope.jpg]

Not bad, not bad at all.
The audio was clear.
The animation was alright (but nothing worth nothing)
The art was pretty good. Really realistic, I guess you put all your effort on it.

Just some constructive criticism:
- You could have added a play button so it wouldnt loop forever. I never heard the song, and Im already hating it as I write this...
- Change the title... why is there a .jpg thing there? It makes it sound as if it had poor quality
- You could have extended the ending a little bit.

Anyway, keep it up. If you keep drawing like this and improve you animation skills I wouldnt be surprised to find one day your animations in the front page =)

GamesR4FITE responds:

Um, nope.jpg is a pretty well known meme meaning "not gonna happen"...
But thanks for the rest. When I can learn how to do that stuff, I'll input it. :)

[LUCKY DAY FOREVER]

Wow, a great piece of animation.
I didnt realize until the end I had been watching it for about 15 minutes. It was so immersing, incredible. I noticed the amount of work it went into it, and Im truly impressed by the outcome!
The audio, sounds, animation, graphics, everything seemed perfectly and carefully put into place.
And leaving all that to a side, the story is kinda deep and a little bit disturbing, but still entertaining. The moral I guess is that nobody should tell you what you need to be happy.
5/5.

[Furby Murder Mansion]

Kinda funny. It remiended me of Robot Chicken.
The part where the kid cries made me laugh a lot XD
But next time you make an animation, try to use more frames... its not so appealing that it skips so much =\

[Stainville Episode 2]

Wow, this has been the most creative animation based on real stuff I've seen in a long time. It was actually funny, imaginative, unpredictable, well animated and entertaining.
Just try to fiddle with the sounds a little bit... at times it was hard to understand the voices. But other than that, noting else to say other than "Great! 5/5"!

[Pwanchi Burger Episode 2]

The animation was very well done.
The voice acting was nice most of the time.
And the story felt compelling, and kinda funny.
Just don't make an intro so long if you plan to keep going with the series.

[Kirby's Sky Tussle]

Really fluid and interesting, I really liked it... well, that was until it said 'Im Done'...
Had it been 30 sec longer (I know, I know... its such a pain to animate stuff) it would have been great.

Anyway, extra points for making something about kirby! =D
I hope to see something full length by you (and kirby) someday.

Geeksly responds:

Huzzah!

[The Dudes in IKEA]

Reupload

Just Re-do the voices. I bet you got 2 more friends that can help you out. The snickers and laughs are way too annoying to be able to enjoy the animation.

The animation and drawings were good though.